Local news attempt


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  1. Ms Stott10 February 2019 at 02:12

    Good work - you are starting to use follow news conventions through using hyperbole. TARGETS:
    MAKE THE FOLLOWING DIRT IMPROVEMENTS IN PURPLE
    - Re-do your opening to make it more shocking e.g. 1000s of school childrens' journey to school was disrupted in Bodmin this morning by a near fatal accident involving a tree and a van.
    - Do not overuse/repeat words/phrases e.g. luckily (change one to a different word).

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